Looks pretty solid! I’m a fan of the air cooler, I’ve built with both and after having the pump fail suddenly on my AIO I won’t use anything other than air.
One thing to double check would be RAM clearance for your CPU cooler vs the height of your RAM. Idk if pcpartpicker checks that and it would suck to get into your build and have it not fit correctly.
My wife and I really enjoyed playing The Quarry together. It’s one of those games where it is more of a movie with decisions so I would do all of the controls and she would do the decisions.