chloe@lemmy.zip to Ask Lemmy@lemmy.world · 18 days agoI would like to know what native English speakers think of my writing?external-linkmessage-square85linkfedilinkarrow-up1206arrow-down111
arrow-up1195arrow-down1external-linkI would like to know what native English speakers think of my writing?chloe@lemmy.zip to Ask Lemmy@lemmy.world · 18 days agomessage-square85linkfedilink
minus-squaremrmacduggan@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up6·18 days agoThere is very little to criticize here. You’ve done a good job! However, it looks like this might have been done very slowly and carefully, so I think you will benefit from practicing writing faster now. You have the shapes, now get the speed!
There is very little to criticize here. You’ve done a good job!
However, it looks like this might have been done very slowly and carefully, so I think you will benefit from practicing writing faster now. You have the shapes, now get the speed!